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shelley's avatar

this was so achingly beautiful to read

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The New Man's avatar

Thank you <3. Really should start writing more poetry. I really enjoy it and ya’ll seem to get a lot out of it too.

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shelley's avatar

very much so. 💕

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Asa's avatar

It’s a shame Substack doesn’t let me upgrade on my phone, what’s up with that?

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The New Man's avatar

That shouldn't be happening actually. Hmm. I've had people upgrade on phone before. All I can say is put in a ticket for a bug with the chat function. Yeah, very weird actually

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Asa's avatar

i can only upgrade on pc browser. it says i can’t on phone, not just for you but all creators. maybe something with my account

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Sarah G's avatar

I'm signed in in my browser and on the app and mine works fine. That is for sure a problem that you need to put in a ticket to have them fix for sure.

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cj's avatar

literally beautiful

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Tess's avatar

I don’t participate in social media and I restrict myself with YouTube and TV. I practice living ‘Here and Now’ and Mindful Living. I liked reading your poem. Thank you being mindful and beautiful inside.

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Rebecca Maschka's avatar

This was beautiful - thank you

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Gina's avatar

Loved it!

We must be close to the same age. .. because that hit 100% in toshared remembrance

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Auria Gutierrez's avatar

I miss it to my friend 🧡

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Sarah G's avatar

Your poetry excites me and makes me want to start writing again. I hear you saying this one too when I read it. Very passionately spoken word like. Loud and with emotion... I feel it.

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